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I began this poem in Sta.sh a long long time ago, back when I still used it. :stare: I DON'T anymore. Anyhoo, this weekend I was stumbling through some poetry, why do I have so much? lol, and decided to finish this.
It isn't an original theme, but it is unique from my brain.

RAY LAMONTAGNE - "Hold You In My Arms" :music: [link]
I could hold you in my arms
I could hold you forever

When you kissed my lips with my mouth so full of questions
It's my worried mind that you quiet
Place your hands on my face, close my eyes and say
Love is a poor man's food, don't prophesize
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~Ard0R0us Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Enjoyable read. At the end I was reminded of a photograph prompt put up by SWS. Woman literally hugging text in human form. For me this poem became even better with each successive stanza. I also couldn't put it down. < clever ha!
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*dragon-fly-to-me Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am glad you enjoyed reading it. :)
It was my goal to build intensity with each stanza. I am glad you caught the flow.
you are clever!!
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:iconthelunalily:
a beautiful story and a beautiful poem. :heart:
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*dragon-fly-to-me Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thanks, dear. :heart:
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:iconthelunalily:
You are quite welcome. :hug:
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*dragon-fly-to-me Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
Beautifully lovely. :aww: Amazing job.
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*dragon-fly-to-me Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Starry. :)
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*vikingjon Aug 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
I knew you were a bibliophile. :)
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