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head thrown back,

tendrils of her hair, a cascading fall of water and sense.

the dancing curve of her exposed throat,

a gasp caught there in the shadows—alive with promise.

the space behind the curving arch of her back,

hollow and hallowed, forgotten for the moment.

the press of parted lips against the space above her erratic heartbeat--

yours to claim, yours to cherish.

yours to satisfy.


here, there is no pride, no past, only passion shared.
here, you give in order to receive.
here, you are you until you are not--
until you lose a sliver of that unique identity to become something bigger;
abbreviated to us.

an allegiance of desire.
an alliance of submission.

a privilege of love.

yield.
resign.


succumb.
:)


"Feel like making love" Bad Company
And if I had
The sun and moon
And they were shining
I would give you
Both night and day
Love satisfying
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A beautiful burn. A delicious word and vision play. :rose:
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:icondragon-fly-to-me:
dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Why thanks. :)
Just me dreamin' is all. :rose:
I'm glad you found it tasty.
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sesam-is-open Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
No words, no comments, just a heart:heart:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
:blush: okay...here is one in return :icongreenheartplz:
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sesam-is-open Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Thank you, I love green!:):tighthug:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
:iconvictorydanceplz:
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sesam-is-open Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
:iconkissmote: :bow: :iconmashedpotatoplz:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this has a nice atmosphere :flirty:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
why thank you, my dear. I was striving for atmosphere. :D
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome :iconcip33:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
:iconbeauroseplz:
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Selveste1 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Omg, it's really very very beautiful :) And very powerful words, it really touched me ^^
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Henrik...this is a lovely comment. I appreciate it very much.
I am happy you could find something to appreciate here. :)
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Selveste1 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Jessica... you're very welcome :blush:
I really think that you write very beautifully, please keep up your good work :)
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
...thank you, sir. :)
I can't promise good work, only the work of this odd female brain.
Have a lovely Sunday!
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Selveste1 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're very welcome, good lady :)
And you don't have to promise anything more than that.
I hope that you had a good Sunday too, and a good start on the week.! :)
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
:) You are very sweet, Henrik. :)
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Selveste1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you, Jessica :)
You too are very sweet and very talented.! :)
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
:blush:
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Heylormammy Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderfully written as always :heart:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
lol...:tighthug: Thanks, Eileen. You are a sweetie.
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Heylormammy Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconmuchlove1plz::iconmuchlove2plz:
:iconmuchlove3plz::iconmuchlove4plz:
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vikingjon Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
Powerful words, J. :)
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Thanks, J. :)
Nearly all words have some measure of power, if the person allows them in. (that was very philosophical sounding of me, eh? ;)I'm unsure how you put up with me.)
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vikingjon Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Professional General Artist
I think you're thinking well. :)
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
:) I have my moments.
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CalleighBlack Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Holy crap. That was awesome! I think you've inspired em to go find a certain DolFinn and put it on him! XD I'm sure he'll be appropriately grateful to you!
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Thanks, ya crazy lass, you. :hug:
I was just in a mood, that's all. ;p
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CalleighBlack Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, your mood put me in the mood! ;)
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
I'm always in the mood..or almost always. :shrug:
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CalleighBlack Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Me too! And if I'm not, it doesn't take much to get me there.
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
mmhumm...(you sound like my granny, btw. :D always had a weakness for my gramps. :heart:)
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CalleighBlack Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwwww.
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
mmhumm...
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